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Goodbye

Title: Goodbye
Author: Serneera
Disclaimer: Doesn't belong to me
Rating: PG
Pairing:Jared/Jensen Implied Jared/Genevieve
A/N: First post ever and it was written just after i said goodbye to someone so and comments are great not bettered so if there are any mistakes let me know
Summary: A Angry goodbye


"I can't deal with your bullshit anymore Jared," Jensen yelled. "You need to decide, I’m sick of my heart being ripped out by you."

"Jensen I'm..." Jared started.

"NO!!!!! Jared you tell me you love me then I come home to find you in bed with her again. I can't do it anymore if you can't make a choice I’ll make it for you." Jensen said cutting Jared off tears of heartache and anger running down his face.

Jared took a step towards him only to have Jensen step back again. "Jen I’m sorry, please. I really do love you I just..."Jared paused trying to figure out how to explain why he cheated on Jensen with Genevieve again.

"Just what Jay" Jensen whispered, the pain coming out with his words making Jared flinch and look away.

Jared just stood there opening and closing his mouth not being able to find the words that he needed to say.

Jensen sighed a "goodbye Jared." and walked back out the door shutting it softly, ignoring the heart wrenching sobs, coming from the other side.

Thank you for reading comment please

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magser
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:13 am (UTC)
This is heartbreaking, you can tell how much it's hurting them both.
I hope writing this helped you some.
serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:16 am (UTC)
it has what happened too bring this out gave me the courage to post it too

thanks *hug*
ymmy12
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:17 am (UTC)
too tragic
will you write more
serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:18 am (UTC)
i'm planing on writing more this is the first step i just need to take more

Thanks
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serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:44 am (UTC)
Thankyou that song is beautiful its exactly like i feel at the moment

*hugs*
bianquiw
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:40 am (UTC)
T.T this broke my heart. *hugs* I could feel every emotion each one of them was feeling. Gosh it griped my heart like a vise. *cries* Loved it. Hope to read more.


It made me think of this song..
tx_roads
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:57 am (UTC)
That's just heartbreaking....
<3
serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 10:05 am (UTC)
thank you that's what i was trying for
saito_enfadadiz
Mar. 11th, 2009 06:40 pm (UTC)
mm jensen should kill genevieve and give jared a good spank!
XD I love this fic!!
serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:04 pm (UTC)
lol i agree with the killing thing well something needs to be done about her
yellowwolf5
Mar. 11th, 2009 07:43 pm (UTC)
aww, that broke my heart :(

*hugs for you*
serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:05 pm (UTC)
well when you have a broken heart thats what comes out

Thankyou
*hugs*
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serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 09:37 pm (UTC)
thankyou
earth_dragon
Mar. 11th, 2009 10:55 pm (UTC)
i was reluctant to read this because i like my j2 all smooshy and in love, but after reading your explination, i can see why you wrote such a piece. i hope you feel better soon, and i'd really like to see more of this verse.
serneera
Mar. 11th, 2009 11:54 pm (UTC)
tyvm i'm planning on writing more in this verse but it will get a lot darker before its gets to a happy ending
maria9631
Mar. 12th, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)
My Poor Jensen this is so heartbreaking. but im glad he decide to leave jared. Noone should stay with somebody that can not be faithful to them. It remind of Rihanna's "Unfaithful"
Im glad Jensen decide to leave even though its breaking his Heart.
Let Jared stay with that witch that deserve to die. hate that bitch! Hope she does the same thing to Jared so he know who much it Hurt Jensen and how Jensen felt.

Sorry to hear you had to say goodbye to somebody. I hope everything works out for the best. I know how it is. Not something one gets over quickly. You must take you time and go at your own pace. Good Luck Hon!

Cant wait for more of this Verse.

serneera
Mar. 12th, 2009 03:17 am (UTC)
No one really likes her do they. i have yet to have someone say hey i like her

i'm pacing myself and taking one day at a time i have friends helping so i'll be alright

they're should be more up soon i promise


maria9631
Mar. 12th, 2009 03:22 am (UTC)
Good to know that you have your friends like I said Good Luck!
serneera
Mar. 12th, 2009 03:23 am (UTC)
ty
supernatangel67
Mar. 12th, 2009 07:24 am (UTC)
Oh so heartbreaking! Great work & thanks for the read. Would love to see more
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